Thursday 2 December 2010

Treatment 2

Outline Ideas

Scene 1
• Outside the school, girls are sitting outside talking. Guys walk past main girl gets distracted (watching main guy). [song starts] [girl walk up to the camera and them break into dance routine]
• Main guy walks toward the school, girl walks behind him singing (I see you on the way to school part)
• Main guy is going into his locker; girl tries to approach him but is interrupted by the boy’s friend. Girl is upset and walks away (is time I let you know part)


Scene 2
• Rapper (one of the friends of the girl) walks down the road to school while singing the rap (same place girls do the walk)
• In the dance studio, girls are rehearsing for their show main girl is not focused; they sit on the floor next to her to comfort her.


Scene 3
• In the classroom, main girl is seated behind main guy. She starts to day dream about him.
• Central park, we see the two main people hanging out (being very loved up and romantic)
• Go back to the school scene and we see the rapper in a classroom with the students as she does her rap.
• Go back to the central London part. We see the dance routine again.


Scene 4
• We see the other girl and see flashes of the guys.
• Go back to the stage scene again (slow motion)
• We see the girls turn and walk away, we see clips of everything that has already happened in the music video so far then back to the girls again


Scene 5
• The school bell rings and then the girls are walking out of school, main guy runs up to the main girl and asked her out
• She says yes and then her walks off. Girls look at each other then laugh
• Fade out then back in again. See the girl on her bed with the lyrics of the song, she turns around and smiles.

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